Hey guysI count on your feedbacks, before pitching at pitmad. These are my three pitches and any feedback is a great help. Thank you.
1) Mrs. Miller an ex-nurse working with the Boyles counts of on Laura’s help the new nurse to find the key of her chains from Laura‘s new boss/lover. Trouble is: Laura might be the one who chained her.
2) Laura a nurse vowed to help Mrs. Miller an ex-nurse chained and tortured by Laura’s new boss/ lover Mr. Boyle inside a hidden basement in his castle. But nothing is ever as it seems when Laura finds out her real identity: Mrs. Boyle.
3) Laura a nurse leaves her only friend Elizabeth to work In the Boyle’s castle. In her first week she discovers a secret basement where the ex-nurse is chained and tortured for a year by Laura’s new boss/lover. Problem is Laura doesn’t know the ex-nurse’s real identity: Elizabeth.
4) In her first week as the new nurse, Laura discovers a hidden basement where the ex-nurse is chained by Laura’s new boss/lover. Laura faces an impossible choice: Helping the ex-nurse and losing her lover or risking being the new victim.