I have slightly more detailed pitches but then I don't have room for comps so I'll post the ones w/comps and see what people think! My story doesn't fit for PitDark so I'll be doing another PitMad. Since the r/relationship style one got me an agent like, it's back this round.
VELOCITY WEAPON + CHILLING EFFECT
I'm (31F) the deaf co-captain of a smuggling ship. My partner (30M) and I want to retire & start a family, but having trouble #TTC. Do we put our dreams on hold & convince our friends to fight colonizing aliens? #PitMad #A #SF
STARS UNCHARTED + VELOCITY WEAPON
Smugglers Mary & Davi plan to retire & start a family. But they'll need to put those dreams on hold to rally a resistance against colonizing aliens – or there won't be a free place to raise a child. #PitMad #A #SF #Infertility #Deaf
CHILLING EFFECT + CRUEL STARS
Just a few more smuggling jobs until Mary & Davi can retire and start #IVF. But colonizing aliens force a choice between putting that dream on hold to fight back or not having a free universe to raise a child in. #PitMad #A #SF #Deaf