Hi everyone--if it isn't too late (I can't believe it's #PitMad time again!) I'd appreciate some feedback on my pitches. At this point all I can do myself is over-tinker. So if anyone is willing to give them a once-over with fresh eyes, I'd be more than happy to return the favor.
Good luck to everyone tomorrow!
Thursday Next x Guy Noir
Writer-turned-PI Joe studies clients as characters and cases as narratives. But when time travel wrecks his 3-act, he must confront his own character to rescue a reality TV judge, forgive himself, and save humanity from eating its tail.
Pitch 2: Dahlia Moss x Dirk Gently
PI Joe wants to escape a shameful present by retiring to the far past. Finding a missing Judge who re-tries historical figures as reality TV may be his ticket. But to learn whodunit, he must resist the urge to change his own past.
MC, a PI, would rather retire to the past than live in a present that uses #TT to re-try historical figures as trash TV. To afford the trip, he must find a missing TV judge. But to learn whodunit, he must face his sins in the present, not run from them in the past.